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swallow me whole.

The painful truth;

It is hoping and praying that one day, someone will understand.
It is crying everyday, and not having the courage to tell someone.
It is losing people that were suppossed to be friends.
It is trusting too easily and being dissappointed in the end.

The painful truth?

It is my life, hopes, dreams, and reveries.
I can't escape the pain and madness that is this world.
I run all day and all night, and I still can't find the sun.
It is hiding, and it is right.
Do i deserve this?

The painful truth!

It is me in this life, and everyday I can only feel


the painful truth.

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basically a mix of options 1, 4, & 10.

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  • Hell In Harmony
    November 6, 2008
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    The painful truth;

    It is hoping and praying that one day, someone will understand.
    It is crying everyday, and not having the courage to tell someone.
    It is losing people that were suppossed to be friends.
    It is trusting too easily and being dissappointed in the end

    interesting take
    thanks and goodluck