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caution

observant and cautious of the future
I wait, with outstretched arms
for somebody to take me away.


as malleable as I am,
I won’t let you step all over me.


this time, I’m watching for you,
the eye of the storm.


- I won’t let you take me by surprise again.

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word prompt: Vigilant.

gaah this sucks I have writer's block.. and I'm trying to overcome it but everything I've written lately hasn't been good at all.

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  • letters to no one
    December 6, 2008

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    "this time, I’m watching for you,
    the eye of the storm.


    - I won’t let you take me by surprise again."


    Great, surprises are crap when certain people are the cause.

    This doesn't suck!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Yes, we must be vigilant to make sure no one takes advantage of us! Nicely done!


  • aanika
    November 9, 2008

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    this time, I’m watching for you,
    the eye of the storm.

    wish I could do that.
    I always end up caught up in things.
    fuckkk.
    this is good though.
    especially for the prompt!
    good luckkkk


  • Ryan79
    November 7, 2008
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    It's good.

    It's very to the point, with a great use of words.