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Practicing

Practice, Practice, Practice
Keys beneath my fingers
Hitting notes I don't know,
as I practice the Piano

I sit alone, in light and dark
An empty chair to help spark
Some inspiration for me,
As I hit notes I do not know
And practice the Piano

He should have been here,
in that empty chair
Listening to me, and to inspire
as I hit notes I can not know
As I pretend to practice the Piano

Oh how I miss him so,
My father who sat be side me
In that empty chair
In light and dark
While I hit those notes and keys I did not know
and practiced the Piano.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    Such a soft sadness to this ....
    Beautifully written
    TY for entering

    Lynda

  • nsmurty
    November 6, 2008

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    Our feet might have grown since, but our steps when we walked together with our parents remain same... as fresh and as small as ever.
    A good memory