I yearn, pen enters my hand and we sink...
Deep withing the sinking sands, we sink
The deepest of my emotions unfold
Us, You an me, My pen and I, wrapped together in a bondage,
limitless, carefree, untold...of
With every stroke of you my dearest pen
The deepest of my emotions I expel
And with every line, I clamax, Again and Again
That metaphysical feeling engulfs me, oh so well
My pen and I... together we experiment with so many techniques
And after each, I reach a higher more tender peak
My thoughts pentetrates my pen,pen penetrates the paper
That paper, through me, becomes my pen's lover
but
I will not become envious, for our threesomes
Brings me to that place of extreme satisfaction
Where I am forever pleased
Pen entering my hands, staining paper, with so much ease
Pure, uncensored expressions, no ambiguities between us
We are indeed compatible lovers
A contest entry
- My Pen is My Lover~ by janejainejayne.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It's my first time writing here. Constructive criticism and general comments would be greatly appreciated. thanx!
Comments
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this was amazing, the thought of you and the pen, symbiotic together, almost as if your poems a a sexual bond between you
great write
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Wow! this is certainly a fabulous poem! only that my mind is dirty, you know, I got that habit of thinking dirty, thats all, I like every bit of it!
Great job, really!
Love and light.
Lencio -
God this is such a great poem!You are blessed and gifted indeed!Love that you kind of wrote an erotic poem but it's about the love of writing rather than sex and we needed somebody to write how great it is to write,lol!Not to just write about other things... that's a good thing to do...keep doing the unexpected odd and magnificent work that you do!
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Dear Nkeshi,
Thank you for your entry to the contest
and Good Luck!
Jane
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