Jesus would sit for all the world to see,
That is what I want tattooed to me.
Then as I clean with my floss
I'd remember that Jesus died on the cross.
Or maybe I'd get my daughter to draw a picture,
One that is rosy and bright
Then when I smile and my teeth hits the light
I'd have a tattoo for all the world to see
One that my daughter drew especially for me.
A contest entry
- Who Would You Tattoo To Your Tooth by ea.
700 points, ended November 8, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
This is lovely I enjoyed the rhymes they give this poem an even brightest smile, may be I would add one to rhyme with picture something like "like a window toward the future"
one that is rosy and bright...
this is just a suggestion. Its a lovely and smooth write as it is.
-
LOVED IT
-
hi! remember me? Great write I loved reading it I laughed so hard after I realized where the tatoo was... I was confused at first!
Chelse -
The fow and ryhme here is flawless
great write
-
This is great poem, I really enjoy your flow and rhyme, and concept here. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry.
-
It's a good way to be reminded every morning of what you believe in and of the person you love.
-
Great poem!
I completly agree =). Great flow and rhyme. Four thumbs up.
~Going for top comments, I'm to poor to applaud~
~ Please stop by and read my poems ~
-
a personal statement with a difference! floss & cross - fun rhyming. Thank you for sharing your teeth tattoos with me.
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
