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Trapped In Here Forever....

I stalk in the shadows
The darkness in your dreams,
Insanity folded into this mess
To further the deranged.

Back and forth in these halls
And here I'll always stay,
My damned soul will ever torment
This place in a weird way.

 

I can never leave here

I am bound here till this day,

Pain still of my death

Will never fade away.

 

How they tied me down

And injected me

Let me slip to death.

Here in this dark hospital

I took my very last breath

 

Closed all the doors on me

And left me to rot in my this hell hole.

No one cared that my soul could still feel

Because to them, things like that are not real..

 

I stair out at the streets at night,

A thing of the past and of such delight,

 

I  see all the normal folks swiftly walking past.

And I still sit here untill at long last

My souls existance is gone in a flash.

And I am nothing, only the past.

 

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ahh, just an entry for Andi's contest.. a littel off the chain but tis okae


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  • redhanded
    November 6, 2008

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    wow. I would say off the chain but it sounds like sumthin I would write. I love this piece! love the flow and the over all idea. it was great thanks for entering.
    ;F
    best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)


    • XxTwigxX
      November 6, 2008
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      Thank You Darling

      I appriciate your comments as always, and im so glad you enjoyed my piece. But I have a few small things I dont like to well about it, but that is neither here nor there. Thank You Again Andi..

      <33

      Danielle