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Last Dance

Love they say is eternal
Love is pure they say
My love for you is a journey
With end begins it way.

Come and see my world
The world of mist and pain
Be the goddess of dark
Till end you shall remain.

The night spells magic
Ecstatic is your glance
Surrender your being to death
And lets have this last dance.

A contest entry

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  • Grateful
    November 25, 2008

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    This is a wonderful poem with an eternal journey through love...beautiful and meaningful words...

    My favourite lines:

    "The night spells magic
    Ecstatic is your glance
    Surrender your being to death
    And lets have this last dance."

    I really enjoyed it....keep up the good work...all the best...

    • angeldreams
      November 26, 2008
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      Glad you enjoyed it!
      Thanks for the encouraging comment of yours.
      Take care, god bless.


  • Angelflower
    November 14, 2008

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    This was a really lovely take on the prompt. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.


    Angel