I know that gun against your head
Feels so cool
And so comforting
That the razor blade
Poised against your wrist
Is the best thing you have felt in forever
The pills are just so close
And yelling for your attention
While the whiskey is singing you a song
Your heart is so broken
And mind is so blown
Nothing matters anymore
But baby please just
Come to me
And realize there is light
If the world will silence
The voices in your head
That are screaming for death
Then it yours
A contest entry
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700 points, ended January 29, 101 entries
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wow this is so good i love it nice work and good luck in the Contest
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Amazing Emotions overflowing in this here piece that you have inscribed with so much powerful imagery the reader can feel your words. I like that, and I appreciate you sharing here. Peace, and pen on poet!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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wow
i loved this
i wish someone would write
something like this for me
good job... really -
Soo deep! It speaks about the awful ways of suicide and how each and every weapon we face sings to us, a drawling a song; urging us to dare and use them. This is lovely. Nice write.
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wow, deep, but so good. I can relate to the mood of this and it is really good and bad. I really love this poem it's fantastic
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i love this
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awsome
i love this poem
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wow. nice. =/
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wow
this poem is so powerful, and dark. its a beautiful poem!!! brovo to you!!! GREAT POEM! if i could give your more claps then 3 i would!
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Wow. powerful, and dark. My two favorite things in a poem. I'm in aww...
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