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At Last

The excitement inside, I cannot contain.

Black lace, red lips, pale face.
Long years disappear, as I anticipate your embrace.
White silken mounds of flesh; trembling waves of nervousness.
- Calm my brain, a shot to numb the pain-

Anticipation of what is near ~
Yielding, seductive eyes- dark pools of longing....... uncertainty inside.
Dark warmth held captive between my alabaster thighs.

In the flesh- my immortal fantasy lover.
At long last, you are mine.......and belong to no other.

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A true account of my once forbidden, and still unattainable , love.

How did I do for a virgin poet?

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  • Bob Fox
    November 9, 2008

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    well

    As a born again virgin I must say this write was very vivid and ...well perhaps I am just a little to old. But well donee poet.


  • Cannonsfire
    November 7, 2008
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    I think for a virgin you steamed up this page lol...well done here, look forward to more. C

    • Criticaleye
      November 7, 2008
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      Thank You! I greatly appreciate your( positive and witty) feedback