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My Only Love

I don’t need a single carat of Gold
Or a diamond to hold
These things won’t lift me up when I fall
That’s why she’s more precious to me among all.

Her love for me glows
Like the river it flows
I like her for the simple reasons she knows
My door of love will never close.

I want to be nothing but a simple faithful man
And give her my best as I can
There are no more stronger words I have to use
Or besides her another girl I would choose.

-Shuberth Dias-

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S h u b e r t h

Written: 29 November 2007 12:34 PM @ 20



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  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    June 9
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    Such a sweet and caring write! =]
    Beautiful!

  • JustAlex
    June 8

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    This was really sweet, i enjoyed this poem even though I don't normally like sweet poems.
    Great write.


  • AbidoodleCullen
    June 4

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    Again, this was so good! Can't wait to read more!
    Abi


  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    March 30

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    nice poem .. its relaly sweet.
    i lik sweet poems

    Favorite lines:

    "Her love for me glows
    Like the river it flows
    I like her for the simple reasons she knows
    My door of love will never close."

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • lonleyteardrops
    November 7, 2008
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    omg this is such a cute poem. i really love it, mainly everything in this poem!!!!


  • Glenn
    November 7, 2008

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    what a wonderful POEM

    Very beautiful, soft and warm are perfect words for this poem. Wonderful stuff.


    Love the All stanzas. Good write.


    , &
    GLENN

    I'm just going to read it a few more times.


  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    November 6, 2008

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    Great job!! Love the rhyme and flow in this. Keep writing ya!! Cheers!!


  • XxbrutalxtragedyxX
    November 6, 2008

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    o my god that is rlly gd im so *bunny*in jealuse now i hate u no im kidding i love u but like as a friend


  • LovingAngelForever
    November 6, 2008

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    Beautiful

    That is such a beautiful poem, a story of a beautiful love. The first four lines are definitely (in my opinion) the best part of this poem, they could stand alone in themselves. Excellent job


    ~Tabitha~

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