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a nightly affair

we sit
lined on a couch
toes tapping
fingers wrapping
that next blunt up

eyes flick open and
shut
each of us
curled up on the hardwood
floors of our brains
we strain to see the other
but it is all brick and wet concrete
and i dont like people peeping
in my windows
anyway

the time it takes to get
roll and spark the next one
leaves me sucking harder every time
trying to get higher
obtain that fifteen minutes
of oh
ok
i get it now

i am sure my boy aesthete
knows what i am talking about
that moment where you think
it could all be ok
right before realizing
it cant

so anyway
when i come down again
i am sleepy eyed
and spied on as i climb
stairs that will take me
up and out of here
into the night air
the rain
my car
which will take me
to that place i reside
for now

my body will drop into bed
i will dream away
the dark
and awake with the need
to do it all again

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  • Hell In Harmony
    November 18, 2008

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    trying to get higher
    obtain that fifteen minutes
    of oh
    ok
    i get it now


    love that part

    knows what i am talking about
    that moment where you think
    it could all be ok
    right before realizing
    it cant

    and that...

    my body will drop into bed
    i will dream away
    the dark
    and awake with the need
    to do it all again

    great ending.....


  • transcendental baby gold member
    November 7, 2008
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    I hear that