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Snow Reasons To Mourn.





I pause in my journey
to the grave of my friend,
to commemorate his birthday
in a mid-December snowfall.

The trees are skeletons
beyond the gate
coated in white.
It is as if the bones,
buried far below,
have pressed their
way outward to taste
the sweet air of life.

All is purified
and hidden deep
under a thick  blanket
woven by mother nature,
but my feet
know the path well.

His stone soon looms
above the thickening drifts,
and windblown snow
obscures all but part
of his epitaph.

His name and
inscription which read:
Harold S. Nottingham
was laid to rest here,
born: September 5th, 1951
Died: in Vietnam
January 11th, 1971
and forever cherished.
now reads:

Harold S Not
here

So I turned to go
whispering softly,
"Semper Fi, Harry."
to a long closed chapter
of another time,
it's last words
cryptically
comforting me.




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  • Lyndon gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    This poem's imagery tells of the everlasting coldness of death. The personalization touches the reader. The second stanza was the strongest and provided a haunting picture even without the illustration. In the future please credit the artist when you post a picture with a poem.


  • feetus
    November 8, 2008

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    Written beautifully!
    The second stanza is picture perfect.
    Be it a creative prompt-based fable
    or a real story of paying respect,
    it's very touching. Thanks for sharing
    & congrats on the trophy.


  • JinSays gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    WOW!
    How very brilliant this is! Absolutely grief ridden, and full of such angst!
    Thank you for entering this contest, and I hope your compadre rests forever in peace.
    Jin