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where they should be

Missing image




scents lingered
in minds, refreshed

floated on air
to embrace hearts

a touch brought
back memories
wrapped in love

forgiveness smiled
in eyes, complete
once more



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  • Angelflower
    November 13, 2008

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    This was really sweet and beautifully expressed, you did a wonderful job with the prompt. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Cannonsfire
    November 6, 2008

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    I am starting to think complete means finish rather than whole but this is just beautiful C


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      November 6, 2008
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      no... complete... whole... tis the only way. You dont always need another to be complete but it would be nice.


      • Cannonsfire
        November 6, 2008
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        What we want and what we get are two vastly different thing


  • Dariha
    November 6, 2008

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    very clean. clever use of enjambment, and evoking a deep sense of unity - particularly the words "Refreshed", "embrace", "wrapped" and obviously, "complete". good accompaniment to the picture. good luck with the contest!

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