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When in my embrace...





When in my embrace, will review my kisses,
for accents stolen in a silver lyre,
illusions split to show me the way
but don't bother, as misapprehension comes to me.

When in my embrace, I feel your eyes
paths draw infinite, meandering
lying on your body to make you beautiful
but don't afraid to die of beauty infidel.

When in my embrace, I love to smell perfumes
of wild eternity of these moments without end
where, alone in the world, Adam and Eve, we're
but don't want any sad traitor of Eden either.

When in my embrace, I'll hear your silences
resound in my heart, learned from wandering,
wrap me in gold for the ecstatic conversation of love
but don't stop, 'cause wandering is my journey.

You've a cutting edge of diamond,
phantom evanescent, souvenir without tomorrow,
to caress you as cutting to shape jewel
as I'm full of you, but emptiness haunts me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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~spiritualangel~

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  • Angelflower
    November 12, 2008

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    This was really beautiful. I love the imagery that you crafted here. and the soft emotion was just sigh worthy. you did such a wonderful job with this prompt. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • banrion
    November 8, 2008
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    delightful!


  • Donchaquestionme
    November 6, 2008

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    Ahhhhhh such a beautiful scribe! While reading it actually gave me goosebumps and made me teary eyed. I love this poem! When words can be more than just words and affect a readers emotions, you know you have done good work.