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Meaning Of sight

When i don't see you see emptiness
your sight gives all the happiness
its like i wake up to the new sunshine
it makes me glad that you are mine
i lie down and watch the stars
it all reminds me of how you are
flowers have no colors if you are not here
without you i just cant see clear
you are the reason why diamonds have worth
without the light they just cant brighten forth
and the light is your smile and love so i need them both.

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can you see an angel when u read this?

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  • divineboy21
    November 6, 2008
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    when somebody needs someone aroun


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    A beautiful take on this picture. Lovely imagery, rhyme and flow. Well done indeed.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene