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Me, Myself and I

I told Me to take the dishes,

But Myself was too lazy,

And I was watching the telli.

 

But we all agree on one thing,

We sometimes deeply wish,

That we lived home with mum.

 

For mum always cleans,

And she never complains,

Making our beds and clothing.

 

But with the stubborn Me,

And myself who's so independent,

I often struggle to keep it up.

 

For who would have known,

That the floors needed cleaning,

And the dishes dosen't disappear.

 

And the longer you wait,

The more dirt collects,

And soon it takes over.

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Prompt: To live alone
I've been living alone in my flat since I was 14, you would have thought that I've gotten used to it by now, but sadly I haven't

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 7, 2008

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    I love this background dear, it goes so well with your poem. It's really hard at times to do all the housework. My husband done a lot of it for me when he was on vacation and had discovered he's glad it isn't his regular job!

    I really enjoyed reading this. The imagery was wonderfully done.

  • Mickie27
    November 6, 2008

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    Very good positive message which reminds me yes the floors do need cleaning, lol! I just haven't got round to it yet. Being alone is something I hated. Flows wonderfully and holds ones attention very well.


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    HAHAHA You must have been looking at all the house work as you wrote this. Which one of you three wrote this?

    Well Done...Best wishes in the contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    November 6, 2008

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    That is one of the major drawbacks of living alone, the way the dirt collects. And there is definitely a tendancy to do the Me, Myself and I thing.

    I like what you have done here. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • chilali
    November 6, 2008

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    I love this hon! And the background is so cute! hehehe. Great work and best to you in the contest

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