A ray of sunshine,
dances around my walls,
a diffusion of light,
by little crystal balls.
Tiny little facet’s,
capture shinning beam,
sparkling in the sun,
with a colorful gleam.
Always moving in time,
sundial of cut glass,
a beautiful reflection,
that in time shall pass.
Author notes
Photo Prompt
A contest entry
- PIF/Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
1200 points, ended November 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So Beautiful
Hello dear poet,
you have penned here a very beautiful poem indeed.
Your descriptions of a rainbow are beautifully penned.
You have provided the reader with amazing visuals of a rainbow.
I think that your write ,should of deserved the gold,
it would of been given to this poem, if it was my contest, but this is only my oppinion lol.
Much love and happiness to you.
~Angel-anne~
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Lovely partners of sunshine and crystal "dance around my walls" with "colorful gleam." You even note their "moving in time" and then that they "in time shall pass." Nicely rhymed, clearly appreciative of these tiny beauties!
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This is beautiful love, would like to see it with you, those beautiful reflections against the wall.
Ra
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Lovely! I also think this covers it all. A captivating write
Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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wow
no more need to be said......wow covers it all
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