My head lying against her chest, relaxed and happy
A smile gracing my face, content in this place
Where I've found my rest, content to brush
My lips on hers, and inside my mind a choir puts
Forth a song, my sunshine, how long will we
Together shine, and I wonder if I'm blind, have
I perhaps lost my mind? She blew a kiss upon
My neck, and I raised my eyes towards the sky as
I laid there on my back, my sunshine, and I can't
Believe that this love is mine, so I whispered
These words as our breaths mixed in one long
Kiss, that these days may last, and it feels like
Bliss, please I thought aloud don't take my
Sunshine away from me.
Author notes
I used the prompt don't take my sunshine away
A contest entry
- PIF Lines by Riftkin.
850 points, ended November 7, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Outstanding
loved the simple sentiment and devotion within this work and the heart put forth in the write . Fine job
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i love your take on the prompt. its so sweet, and makes me want to go and hold on to my love and kiss him until all the lipstick has rubbed off my lips.
if only everyone knew this kind of love.
-andi -
I love these wonderful words you have written here for this the prompt you picked to write about. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Riftkin
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