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Learning more about myself with every line

I am a skeptic and a lover
I wonder when i will recover
I hear voices shouting in my head
I see my fears the thoughts i dread
I want to be free and break this curse forever
I am a skeptic and a lover

I pretend to be someone i'm not
I feel fake like my soul is bout to rot
I touch my heart but there is only a hole
I worry my dreams have been replaced with rock and roll
I cry at the very thought as i realize
I pretend to be someone i'm not

I understand that i'm not the man I once was
I say it's not what He did it's what He does
I dream of a day that I will not be fake
I try to do better for my daughters sake
I hope that she will be proud of what i've done
I understand that i'm not the man I once was

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  • raw love
    November 6, 2008
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    I think you've gotten better at this poetry thing

    I am prayin for you bud.


    • undyingservent
      November 7, 2008
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      doesn't mean i was bad to begin with does it

      lol


      • raw love
        November 7, 2008
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        cough, cough, maybe.
        no just kidding.
        just means you've gotten better.