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Christmas Poem

Kneel before the infant child,
Holy One, so meek and mild,
In my heart I sing your praise,
I want to worship you always,
And tell your wondrous story
Until you come again in glory.

Shepherds and kings searched for you,
Guided by the brightest star.
You came down from heaven,
Born to be our Saviour,
By your wounds we are made whole,
You carried our sins upon your shoulder.

Author notes

I wrote this Christmas poem in 2005

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  • parenchma
    July 21
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    Strait out of Isaiah...

    • harriet567
      July 29
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      Yes, the last 2 lines are based on Isaiah 53:5-6 - the true message of salvation! Thanks be to God for allowing His Son to take the punishment that we deserved.


  • thejollytinker
    November 19, 2008
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    Excellent rendering of the faith. Wish you a soulful Christmas!! Thank you!

    • harriet567
      November 20, 2008
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      Thanks

      God bless you too and all the children who will receive the shoe boxes. Love and hugs, Cathy (Harriet is my screen name)


  • Violinstrings silver member
    November 6, 2008
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    yes it is good

    do not worry this is a lovely christmas poem
    which I did one when I was younger
    I had idea and it is callled
    Christmas Tree Remembrance
    it was an old idea that I later used as a more elabarate form
    you do have a chance of winning a prize in my contest

    • harriet567
      November 9, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your comment - it's a good idea to bring back past poems and revise them for future contests. Although not written as a child, I started writing poetry when my children were young and writing is still enjoyable a decade later!

  • Violinstrings silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    this is good

    this is a good poem
    you should resubmit this to a religious contest
    which I would like to have another contest just for religious poems done at a young age
    I will let you know of religious groups on allpoetry

    • harriet567
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thanks for your encouragement and for the Honorable Winner trophy!

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