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Colour Therapy

How I love those prism displays 
exuding optical colourful rays
Look deep inside the crystals aura
this is no Zeus gift to Pandora
There is no evil in this space
only comforting light to embrace
Let the rays caress your soul
making you happy, making you whole

Author notes

UK SPELLING OF THE WORD COLOUR
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  • Mirthryl
    November 7, 2008

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    Great rhyming, some of the best I've seen in a good while! Love the combo of "aura" and "Pandora"! Interesting meter adds to the poem. Very good imagery. I enjoyed this.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Aussie spelling of the word COLOUR too
    A soft and beautiful take on the photo. This has a lovely flow and rhyme.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


    • Yorkshire kevin
      November 6, 2008
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      HI
      Thank you for kind comments and letting me enter your contest.
      KEVIN X