The coolness flows
ignore barriers of aura
force extent of free images.
Poetry of rainbow,
hope into sounds
haggles shadows enlightenment
stammering
volcanoes in pain of rejection
revolts
design a different sphere
getting colorful destiny
forging a virginity of soul.
Moment of communion
strength of obvious
instant at a point
of hiding, lost lies
exiled from time.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Photo prompt
57 words
A contest entry
- PIF/Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
1200 points, ended November 7, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully thought-provoking "barriers of aura." Lovely "poetry of rainbow." I enjoyed "sounds haggle shadows." Congratulations on your trophy!
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Thank you for this very beautiful take on the picture. Your piece is so full of wonderful imagery and metaphors. I love your last stanza the most.
Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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