Dripping wet out,
you come,
us in the shower,
was it fun.
I soaped you from
head to toe.
Caressing your nipples,
soaping your breasts,
my cock getting harder,
with each caress.
Can, you feel it against.
you now,standing proud.
Not at all shy,
your nipples erect,
as I soap tummy and below,
feeling your pussy,
soaping the lips,
not forgetting to
massage your cit.
our bodies turn as one,
lips meeting,
tongues finding we belong.
I am so hard you so wet,
but you haven't soaped me yet.
Tease me wash me,
play with me with your hands,
then guide me in to
you were I belong,
and let us make love
with the shower on.
The hot spray adding to,
our delight,
I want you girl,
it feels so right.
Author notes
From pic prompt "Astride" by marty Provost.
A contest entry
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Yummy imagery, thank you for entering and good luck, Josie
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Sizzling! I bet you are fun to take a shower with!!!
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lol!! thank you.
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A very bold write! My personal preference is for more 'show' than 'tell' .. I think some imagery added here might take away the 'tell' aspect a bit and give the mind something to feed on and play out, without being walked through each step.
"we in the shower" <== should be "us" instead of "we" or perhaps "we're" to read grammatically correct.
Nicely done! Thanks for entering.
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Thank you for your comments , changed we to us hope not too late.
best wishes Carl.
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A courageous and candid poem...no holds barred here.
Best of luck my friend!
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Thank you, like my motto, all or nothing.
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ps, dont forget to add the artist link, I'd hate to see this DQed for something like that
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Thank you , i forgot.
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that last line sings. this is truly a wet dream I think. I know I've had it, but to a different degree of course
Really nicely done, there's no mistaking what you mean in this,
Quite nice to read a sexy romp in the shower without feeling all dirty again, and this is not easy to do.
Wonderfully done, I wish you all the best,
jin
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Thank you so much for your comments,
glad you enjoyed it, best wishes Carl.
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