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maybe we could have.



i trace the parts
of your smile that stick out,
awkward-like

you poke the things
inside of me, that roll and roll
like sweat drops

we lie like that, tired
words jump, elastic in our
brittle voices

limp dreams follow us
like shadows.

if only i said what i had to
instead of letting rain drench
our limbs

we could have seen august together.


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  • Walk-Free
    November 10, 2008

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    this was beautifully sad.

    i loved these lines,

    "limp dreams follow us
    like shadows."

    it