I didnt make the first move
i was too shy to care
i wanted to do it so bad
but i chose to let it pass
i realized i made a mistake
but then i knew it was too late
why didnt i do it
i keep beating myself up
i should have done this
i should have done that
i had it in my grasp
but it always didnt matter
i made many decisions
many cost me my happiness
maybe even some of my soul
i want to recapture it
but i dont know where it went
i cant believe that it is gone
i could have been lucky
i could have had many things
but i chose this one thing
i chose not to go after my dream
and it cost me my life.
A contest entry
- Intolerable Fury by XOne Winged AngelX.
600 points, ended November 21, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Another good one
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An interesting write, I particularly like the second paragraph. I'm not quite sure why but to me the flow seems slightly shaky at parts, yet perfect at others.
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hey bro very good poem, u have let alot of things go but hopefully u will get some of them back.
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umm who is this supposed to be about? thanks for commenting on muffins...and i hope everything goes ok...i have a dr appt in dsm on mon nov 10 im scared that im gonna really f*ck this up ya know...very unnerving...oh btw guitar hero world tour kicks a$$.
i miss u and ttyl
lissa
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good luck. i rlly hope that it will be a good appt. dont be scared. its gonna b alright. i cant wait to play it
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Nice poem
Good flow, but its annoying to read with the I's uncapotilized. -
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srry bout the uncapitolizes Is
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