Puncture and i feel
Potions helping me to deal
With what i think, then mind goes blank
My life forced me to walk the plank
Mutiny, loves lost, my lifes a waste
Moving forward with far too much haste
Release the string, just one last rush
My head, my brain, i feel the crush
Nothing more to think of, till im down offa this high
Never thought that night would be that night
My last, cause i would die
A contest entry
- Intoxicated by Hell In Harmony.
3500 points, ended November 18, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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kinda cliche . parts were good though thanks and goodluck
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