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Sanguine Moon

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Blood runs from the moonlight
Dripping sweetly
feeding the creatures of the night
Sweet sorrow
Their song's of love serenading each other
Eyes glow red
in reflected light from deep dark shadows
Gone in an instant
at the approach of unwanted intruders



Author notes

30 to 60 words
Prompt is :
scarlet moonbeams
swims in her eyes
like the color of nocturnal poem
bleeding like flesh wounds....Sweet Sorrow

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  • Sweet Sorrow
    November 14, 2008
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    A different take on the given prompt. Excellent ans imaginative. Thanks for sharing and goodluck


  • Sweet Sorrow
    November 14, 2008
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    A different take on the given prompt. Excellent ans imaginative. Thanks for sharing and goodluck


  • feetus
    November 6, 2008

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    Great writing. You have a ton of talent in writing,
    and you seem to do exceptionally well with promts,
    acrostics and short word limits. Keep writing,
    I'm waiting to read. G'luck in the contest


  • hoodoolover silver member
    November 6, 2008
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    Very cool and imaginative write, I like the images this evoked in my head, well done!