Let me kiss your soft white flesh
taste the depths within
caress you with my hungered lips
linger on soft skin.
I feel your life blood flowing, needing
pulsing with desire
turn this candle into flame
burn with ardent fire.
I take you to a world, undying
let me feed tonight
as I drown inside your beauty
accept your saviours bite.
Author notes
Picture prompt.
Artist unknown.
Maybe I've been watching too many vampire movies lately 
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- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended November 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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This had a soft feel to it. I like the way it seemed deadly but romantic as well. You did a wonderful job with the prompt. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck.
Angel
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very well penned.
accept your saviours bite. ....saviour's??
best of luck -
This is so awesome. i love it...... vampire's rock. and you did a great job. i think. it's better then mine.
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