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With Open Arms

I see you in
          every shape
                    and shadow
                              of movement

you have
come for me,
please take me home

                              for some
                    strange reason
          you represent
my salvation

and I welcome it.

I request your most honest statements.

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  • Afxb
    April 27

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    Wooh...I have sweet tears .... this is so much how I feel.
    And have tried to express in my trio of Sculpture poems,

    The interpolation of "strange" really did it for me


  • Pusher
    November 7, 2008

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    Great poem dude, simple and effective like a sledgehammer to a child's face.

    You should come to England and party with me, yaaah!

    *hugs*

    (pusher)