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broken will



for too long
walked behind
when it should
have been beside

belittled a soul
diminished a voice

denigrated by hands
tossed aside free will

thought she wove magic
in realisation disparaged

resilliance seeped
loss of innocence
consumed by gnashing teeth
and displaced emotions


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resignation

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  • Cannonsfire
    November 6, 2008

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    Resilience at best is the light from within another person, resignation is the fact sometimes we never notice the other person shine at all. It's not our fault C


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 6, 2008
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    Very potent stuff...grand take on the prompt