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Giacomo Mcintosh Rasavage



I like the middle name ‘Mcintosh’
Because It is definitely very Scottish
It goes well with the name ‘Giacomo’
For he is quite an adorable fellow
    'Giacomo Mcintosh Rasavage'
That gives him quite the advantage!





Author notes

Here's a quickie. He's so cute. I couldn't help but enter something. How could I not?

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  • PrincessOfFire
    December 5, 2008

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    Wow a tongue twister for me! Thats why I stuck to a simpler name for mine. I wanted something different, but thats a different story. Well done short piece. may I suggest you add the pronounciation in the notes. Always Rose


  • poetrandy
    November 8, 2008

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    Very Good!

    Interesting, different (not weird,) and very creative! It's a fun poem with a double or triple entendre! I like it, dear! Good work in such a short poem!


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      November 8, 2008
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      That was one of the quickest poems I ever wrote!... and short. lol's It was a fun, spur of the moment one I did for our Animal Lover's Group. I enjoyed it though. Not my usual style, but like I said - I try different things and try to break out of my own mold... Short is often better. It depends...
      Thank you for reading it. I am glad you liked it!


  • SilverQ
    November 6, 2008

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    Very funney

    Great poem, You actually made a short, funny poem that flows well and rhymes, good job

    ~Going for top comments, I'm to poor to applaud~
    ~ Please stop by and read my poems ~


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      November 8, 2008
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      Thank you for reading my poem, Giacomo Mcintosh Rasavage! I did this in like one second. lol's It was the quickest one ever. I enjoyed it though. Thanks again.

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