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Sleep Tight

Dark
wind blowing
as the windows whistle
on a blustery night

Tossing and turning
sleep won't come
as the house moans
on a blustery night

All stops
silence is felt
fading now into slumber
on a blustery night...

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  • penman gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Thank you so much for sharing.