That look of rejection spoke volumes
hollowed out wimpish demands silent
wrapped in the arms of velveted darkness
expanded by sad fragilistic demands.
Low-keyed relaxed all of its boundaries
rushing in the remains of its haul
nothing enlightening to share though
nothing helps nothing to flex fall
Noting the dual lifeless force weakly calling
dulled by the pain left to closed shutters
annihilation has grasped its last straw
nothing and no one to hinder; evermore.
Author notes
WORD: Resignation
A contest entry
- Word & Picture Prompt by Cannonsfire.
900 points, ended November 19, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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Great take with this prompt, you nailed it. Best of luck.
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whisper
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Nice job with the prompt, Very good flow and movement in this one.
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Thanks Z
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Clever, clever wit in your ink and
soul!
I loved that line:
"annihilation has grasped it's last straw"
giggle...sis...like some republicans I
know!
sorry, couldn't resist!
I thought you really wrote this cleverly
on the word: resignation.
lovely prompt too!
ears/Seattle Sis
I adore your writing -
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Thanks
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Thanks, hahaha, it could have a hidden meaning in there somewhere lol
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Fine pen you have here and have written the prompt in strong terms. C
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