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Jr's Kitchen Dance

Jr's gone crazy in the kitchen
swatting at a fly
Cursing and a fussing
But the fly, it just flies by

He blamed it all on Jeannie
Said the door was open wide
While she stood there just a blabbing
Instead of going on outside

He thought I wasn't looking
Swung that flyswat like a bat
Turned him all the way around
Scared the hell out of the cat

The poor dog started barking
Ran right underneath his shoe
I would have paid good money to
Watch that dance he had to do

Nothing's more annoying than a fly
That just wont die
Except watching Jr try to hit it
Must not be using his "Good Eye"



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  • nom de guerre
    November 6, 2008
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    Oh my, Junior has a Good eye? I'm almost afraid to ask what the bad one looks like.

    This is cute, and even better, it's fun to read. It's an ordinary situation taken to its extreme. I guess we've all had those battles with flies, but Junior, that poor boy, he just doesn't have all his oars in the water.

    Thanks, this was fun.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 6, 2008
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    lol, i like this one you did a fantastic job on this poem really, keep it flowing