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Nothing more than a notion
caught between
a dream
and a sacred reality
that cannot be undone.
You have penetrated
my very soul,
haunted my curiosity,
and remain faithful to my obsessions...
Internally I run to
all the places we have,
and the pieces that fit,
still none solidifies that gap
between you & I...
We blend among society
programmed & proper,
with a distance
that is safe for all
never to be uncovered
or rewritten.
As my eyes break away from yours
and we part our separate ways
we've already shared a thousand words
never to be heard
by an unforgiving world.

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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    November 8, 2008
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    Very nice I like this, thank you for entering the contest and good luck.