oh those sweet summer days,
when time played on our wings,
and we found nothing but promises
and dreams in our tea
we live for these breaths,
they own us forever,
and the novelty lives
even through the pristine...
A contest entry
- A lil' two dayer - kinda quickie by thejollytinker.
1400 points, ended November 8, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really lovely! I think you've captured the picture in such a poetic voice, brevity and with the feel of it perfectly
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I love it!!! You did a wonderful job with this piece sis!!!! This is so well written!!!!!! Your words are so lovely and flowing!!!!!!! This is truly a magnificent piece!!!!!
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Thanks for taking me back with eloquence and such lovely word play. Truly poetic!
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