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Something Short To Predetermine Your Lives

When I make it back
When we get through the fog
Will you still love my ending
Will you still care for me
I want to say that I'll return

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  • going nowhere
    November 6, 2008

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    then say it! this was something that made me think of that someone special who has been there... and both are waiting.. one TO return, and the other FOR the return while that fog creeps up so quickly... thank you