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Thats how long

Twelve years.
That's how long i've known you.

Twelve years.
That's how long i've loved you.

Twelve years.
That's how long i've stayed quiet.

Twelve years.
That's how long i've tried to hide it from you.

Twelve years.
That's how long it took you to notice me.

Twelve years.
That's how long it took you to take me.

Twelve years.
That's how long it took us to become one.

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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    This is very nice 12 yrs is a long time but i'm sure it was well worth it, love can stay strong forever. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.


  • Mozaic
    November 5, 2008

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    Time stood still for 12 years...your words uncover a true test of patience, yet sounds like it was worth the wait!


  • albinoblacksheep720
    November 5, 2008
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    ... Oh dearie me...

    Your emotions for him are this yearning...