Towards the horizon my mind drifts
brilliant glow shining in the sky
Familiar gray satellite looking down
with a purple glow
Author notes
violet moon
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #2 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 6, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
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you're still looking for your muse? .. whoa, if you wrote this without your must intact, i wonder how cool the rest will be when you do have your muse..
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Thank you
I am glad you liked it. I have been struggling lately with my muse.
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Hell, buff, I thought it was great! Our 'ol sojurnoer of the night- well depicted.
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Thank you
Thank you so very much. Best of luck to you
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"Towards the horizonmy mind drifts"
Absolutely beautiful. You have done very well with the prompt! Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Thank you
I spend many nights watching the moon and stars looking for inspiration
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i love the first line and the glow around the gray of the moon
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Thank you
Thank you very much. This was a fun prompt to work with
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I like the direction of this piece. I believe with taking out a few fillers (work without "the" whenever possible) you could free yourself up more to bring more depth. Nicely done, tho!
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Thank you
Thank you for your wonderful comment and advice. All the entires in this contest are amazing
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Ahh the moon is a guiding satellite to many.. imagine if it was purple!
Coolio 
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Thank you
I believe the moon controls more than the tides, purple would be the most sensual of moons
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what a lovely way to describe the moon.
helen~
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Thank you
Thank you for your kind comment
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I really love your take on the prompt. I really love the opening line. Excellent job
good luck
kat
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Thank you
Thank you so much Kat. Best of luck to you too
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