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Mortality

Spider webs of time,
colors faded dull,
an image from antiquity
that speaks to me today.

Once bright and full
of energy, this image,
filled with life, was
captured in its prime.

The name has long
been forgotten,
but it whispers
a warning that echoes
down dusty corridors…

life’s promise is
only for today.


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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: matthew slade - malachite formation 2 (obsessionart.com)
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  • Meroza
    November 11, 2008

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    Oooh, I tried a billion times to come up with something for that photo but ended up with nothing, I admire your talent!

    Best of luck!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    And so we live for the moment.. for a promise can only be today, who knows what the future holds.

    Stunning!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    I've read this many times/ this poem is Beautiful.
    Brilliant job on the prompt.

    good luck
    kat