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I Am Woman

I'm tired of falling under a man's spell.
They make me feel weak and useless.
I am strong, see me stand tall.
I am invincible, you can't tear me down.
It is time women should stop being puppets.
Let the men bow down to us for a change.
Let them be out puppets.

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credit goes to..matthew slade
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it was found on obsessionart.com

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    wow this is most definitely a strong poem. You did an excellent job with this prompt. the emotions through out this piece are vivid.. Excellent job

    good luck
    kat


  • chilali
    November 6, 2008
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    Oohh! Hehe. Nice take on the picture! A great short write. Best to you in the contest