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Lunar Circulation

The truth is


that the blood moon only streams
around the Earth in darkened stasis

 for the sake of sweetened dreams,

refracting light is ghostly phases.

 

 The colors I see

 will never paint this tragedy

and eventually this syzygy

will be the death of me.

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  • Sweet Sorrow
    November 14, 2008
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    Fabulous and thought provoking. Good take on te prompt. Thanks for sharing and goodluck


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    clever poem....clever......
    for the sake of sweetened dreams
    refracting light ghostly phases.

    it is interesting to see how we all wrote
    from the prompt!
    I really enjoyed your poem!
    ears/Seattle