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Cross

Just an old rotting piece of wood
Standing for many years upon Golgotha's hill
Feel the power of someone/something still
An ancient covenant had been made
So much pain and so much blood was shed
A broken body hung lifeless river bled

Something dark and heavy lay at its feet
forgiven souls wrapped round angel wing
Deep blue roses grew near a spring of pure water
Maggots and worms tried to devour its body
Yesterdays tears of holy beings held them back
Fire from sky in ancient thunder tempest


The story of a fallen Prince of light

A war amongst Angels twas said

Deception, betrayal, denial and banishment

Seems man knows the vipers words well

Death had planned mans sad demise

And something significant a good son sacrifice

 

A sad story told in tears of blood

About a great God who gave his beautiful and only son

A people who had forgotten what love means built a cross

A sad sacrifice of pure love that a world may live in him again

 

Sometimes we envision the cross a mystic symbol
Of all the pain and suffering in an uncaring world
Sometimes we see Resurrection and rebirth
The covenant of a Universal caring being power
So insignificant an object yet so withstanding
The question always comes around and around

Why such stories of this rotting wood still abound

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  • Excellent

    A very fine write, as usual, my friend. You always express your ideas quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • wow. this was excellent. a marvelous read with thoughts, feelings and imagery. it made me think most importantly. and i like to actually go through a bit of the old thought process now and then.
    thank you for being such a good poet.


  • liltulip gold member
    May 19

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    passionate

    what a glorious poem your pen has created with faith and hope, and belief, i enjoyed this very much...congrats on the bronze


  • alone4ever
    May 19
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    I really like it/....

    I usually don't like religous poems or whatever however I really like these poem... keep it up

  • Pristine, your ponderings spill amazingly onto the page, reminding us that a cross is nothing more then a symbol of love and hate, intersecting to make a whole. What is one without the other?

    "So insignificant an object yet so withstanding"

    Two thousand years it has stood as a testament of love and hate; it reminds us to forgive and sacrafice. It reminds us to love those things that we hate, so maybe we can withstand as well.

    It also reminds to hate what one should love: those who persecute. I'm not sure if the cross has done as much good as it has evil, many have perished for it's sake.

    Maybe not so insignificant after all?

    Personally, I will have no crosses erected, or fashioned on my being, for I fear it has become an idol itself.

    A question: Do you think they wear crosses in Heaven?

    I love your passion, your honesty and insight.


    • Antipodi
      May 19
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      Jason your point is well taken ..no I don't think they wear crosses in heaven as for us having one as a symbol ..you are also correct the cross is only an earthly reminder and we should not make it into an idol to wear to kiss or to worship at ..if we read our Original Greek bible the commandments make us aware of this...as i said it is just a rotting piece of wood and it is who the cross carried that we must remember and their sacrifice wood is wood and all material things of earth mean nothing except to remind us of the great event of true forgiveness and suffering for love


  • Rose Angel gold member
    May 19

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    Your passion for your faith in this vivid portrayal in your own creative write of the passion of Jesus..I truly delight in this scribing... Like a legend associated with the cross, and the rotting wood..It could likely be true...but we know the real truth that 'God's son was crucified, buried and resurrected...And many lives were changed because of that day...and till this...The Cross of Christ stands alone as the only salvation for all...Awesome penning..A....

  • thanks for entering it is a good poem that deserved a bronze,


  • JinSays gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Year tears of holy beings held them back
    Fire from sky in ancient thunder tempest

    The question always comes around and around

    This is inspiring and as sure as anything I've ever read about being confused and lost.
    I admiit wearaing out the butt of my blue jeans scooting away from my faith, and wearing out the knees crawling back.
    This is a ttrue testimony of this neverending and vicious cycle.
    Absolutely wonderful.
    Thank you.
    Jin

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