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Seas of Yesterday

Missing image




you held me tight,
i lay here dormant
wondering,
am i your touchstone tonight?

do you see through me?
are you my complacency?

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    May 26

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    Thank you for sharing!

    Wow! I really think that this was good. It is very short, but powerful.
    ~~Shannon~~
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    you've said a lot in these words. the last 3 lines I love them.. I love your take on the prompt, you did an excellent job.

    good luck
    kat


  • chilali
    November 6, 2008

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    Very nice. Short and sweet. Nice take on the picture Best to you in the contest.


  • fairytalelovestory
    November 5, 2008
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    wow this is really pretty.