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Graverobbing

I creep by candlelight
down the moonlit rows,
stopping here and again
to run a finger along
a stone-hewn epitaph:
Here lies Tom Hardy
(but no mention of
the man he killed).
There are others, too, names
overshadowed by deeds.
A few are favorites
to which I often return,
as a peckish man returns
to pick a turkey carcass;
a keen eye will not fail
to find a fleshy morsel
or even a bit of marrow.
As I pry the dusty covers,
each stifling sanctum
takes a suffocating gasp
then, with rancid breath,
hisses a sinister sigh.
I turn the bones, brittle
as aged pages yellowing
in ancient tomes.  I filch
a few moldy relics—
quickly, quietly. I dare not
utter      a word      aloud
lest my voice sound hollow,
merely      an eerie      echo
of the dead.        I shrink
from a smirking skull,
its eyeless sockets locked
on me, knowingly.  Retreating
with a lumpy burlap sack,
I creep back to my covert
eager to stitch another
macabre patchwork.

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  • Desiree Darkk
    February 17
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    I came here looking for comedy and instead found something more. Thank you.

    Hi

    Desiree


  • Nangaleema
    November 7, 2008

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    "creeping back to the sepulchre
    where I stitch
    my macabre patchwork"

    intriguing write. very vivid imagery. i like that the ending is a bit mysterious. i enjoyed this. - NANGALEEMA

  • Michael Dennis Rivers
    November 6, 2008
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    Nicely done

    Wonderful, I like the way this works as a metaphor for creating macabre poetry.