paralyzing emotions,
they cloud the visionary aspects
of judging the day
you are left in altered ruins
trying to decipher
the good from the bad
but it is not in haste,
no matter what is said,
the pain has purpose,
no matter how sad
and you will survive,
stronger,
smarter,
alive
Author notes
Prompt is below
scarlet moonbeams
swims in her eyes
like the color of nocturnal poem
bleeding like flesh wounds....Sweet Sorrow
A contest entry
- Beneath The Darkness of Velvet Sky...Prompt is UP! by Sweet Sorrow.
1800 points, ended November 15, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Excellent take from the given prompt. Thank you for sharing and goodluck
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Very nice to find a hope amongst the darkness here, well done...
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oh..lovely, lovely, lovely...
pearls of moonlight wisdom in this
poem!
i loved how you etched it...
paralyzing emotions,
they cloud the visionary aspects
of judging the day
you are left in altered ruins
trying to decipher
the good from the bad
well done!
ears/Seattle
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