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Red sky at night

heavenly  dreams illuions of  the past
cause her wounds to cry
water from the sky
tomorrow could be the day
she dies
but today she lives...she lives

Author notes

it was very beautiful to work with

A contest entry

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  • Sweet Sorrow
    November 14, 2008
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    Sorry for my spelling. I overlooked at it


  • Sweet Sorrow
    November 14, 2008

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    First wo lines expressed sadness nut the last line express hope. Good take on the given prompt and thank you. Goodluck


  • hoodoolover silver member
    November 6, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    great job poet....aching us with your ink...and
    capturing us with bold hope!

    well done, well done....
    i agree.. it was truly a lovely and inspiring prompt!
    ears/Seattle