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Violated

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ceramic judgements cast their vote,
she is guilty,
whether it is moral or true,
her guilt is evident in the carefree picture
of today's adolescents

and the tile is cold,
the mascara runs,
but her sorrow must be short,
because today,
no one cares,
for it is on her to preserve her morality

and her innocence drips down moonbeams and impregnates the soil,
and
    it
     aborts

 

 





 

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Picture Credit: http://asbeautydies.deviantart.com/art/Some-sort-of-closure-60697780

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    Whooaaa!
    Speechless.

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • friend
    November 5, 2008
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    very well written piece, especially the ending.