I want nothing more
than to pull down the night...
pluck it
spread it
drape it as a cloak
across slumped shoulders.
Let luminescent stars sear fragile flesh
rendering me unto nothingness
encompassing me into everything.
Author notes
30-60 words on prompt:
scarlet moonbeams swims in her eyes
like the color of nocturnal poem
bleeding like flesh wounds....Sweet Sorrow
A contest entry
- Beneath The Darkness of Velvet Sky...Prompt is UP! by Sweet Sorrow.
1800 points, ended November 15, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was deep, words draping my mind and keeping me visually peaked! Love the expressive and reaching words coming to life in my mind. Excellent work! Loved it
~Tia
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I want nothing more
than to pull down the night...what a way of putting your thoughts in words, an excellent one and so poetic. Thanks for sharing and goodluck -
very nice, like the startrek back drop. this is what it feels like to get beamed up and round the world. lol. i do enjoy this well transfered prose.
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I think that this is really good thanks for sharing and the best to you in the contest have a great day be well
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oh..lovely, lovely!
wonderful ink....
I want nothing more than
to pull down the night...
astounding imagery!
this might be my fav!
i thought it was a great writing
prompt too!
you feasted us with this poem!
ears/Seattle -
This is beautiful! I think we all at one time or another wish we could simply disappear under the cloak of stars.
Love,
Amera♥
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As I sit under blanketed stars and read this it makes me smile because of the truth that ring in these words and how great it could be if everyone could have this capability.
Lovely write!
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