My dear love
I must confess
That its I who caused this mess
And if I could
I swear to you
The world would not have come unglued
I’d go back in time
And fix my words
And keep your heart for sure.
My dear love
Of course I miss you
It’s all I ever do
I still don’t know how I’ve managed
These broken months without you
My dear love
I know you do not trust
Any words I manage to rush
And I’m sure you call it lust
Still I am missing your touch
My dear love
Could you forgive?
For the words I rushed to furnish
And all the things you think I’ve lied
And for the tears that were in my eyes
I know you don’t believe me
And I’m sure that you don’t care
Don’t you know how I’ve been aching
Every day since the mistake
And even if you swear
That our love was never true
You still have my heart, this I can promise you
Oh my dear love
You precious thief
You’ve changed every little piece of me
Don’t you know you changed my world
You gave hope to the little girl
Oh love, please do not fret
I can promise this yet,
You will always have my heart,
Even if our end may be his start.
A contest entry
- A Letter To My Love by Erotik Rose.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can relate to this on a very strong level. My well Ex and I broke up about a month ago and I still long for him. He I bet has moved on but still I miss him.
beautiful.
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Very nice I can feel your pain, good luck in the contest and thank you for entering.
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Good write. Good luck in the contest.
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wow! i really like this piece because it shows emotion very well and the last line, Even if our end may be his start, is fantastic! good luck in the contest! ♥
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the rhyming scheme and line-per-stanza is off,
but a decent love letter none-the-less.
good luck in the contest
-ZeInkslinger of God
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